[is shang qinghua at the pool for a dip? because there's already someone inside. fully clothed. and holding onto the edge of the pool (because he can't actually swim, technically, though he's sure he could figure out through analysis and math if he wanted to, because that's how his canon rolls but i digress).
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and now, instead of covered in sparkles and feathers, he's wet and covered in sparkles and feathers. great.]
although not for a dip, shang qinghua is here! it isn't unusual for there to be others where he goes, so ray's presence doesn't surprise him. no, it's the sorry sight that halts his steps.]
[shang qinghua visits the armory after the trial. with a fist to his chin, he stands before a display of swords, seeming to consider whether or not he should invest in one—and muttering to himself while he's at it.]
. . . can't take it out until the week is over. Not even two weeks have passed. Really, they can't expect a death every seven days . . .
[here is shang qinghua, browsing flowers in the courtyard. he starts to reach out, then pauses. reconsidering, he brings a hand out to a group of violet lilacs . . . ]
[based on what he's heard, ray visits the laboratory often. so it comes as no surprise to him that he would find the boy here, though he pauses in the doorway. after that overwhelming reveal, everyone's bound to be a little jumpy.]
Young man, if it weren't for you, we might not have found out the truth.
week 1; tuesday
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and now, instead of covered in sparkles and feathers, he's wet and covered in sparkles and feathers. great.]
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although not for a dip, shang qinghua is here! it isn't unusual for there to be others where he goes, so ray's presence doesn't surprise him. no, it's the sorry sight that halts his steps.]
Y . . . young man, is everything all right?
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Everything's great. [no!!!] You can move along now.
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You're covered in feathers. [and sparkles.] How did this happen?
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[ugh. since they're not coming off, he climbs out of the pool, dripping water everywhere. time to go fetch a towel.]
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week 1; saturday
. . . can't take it out until the week is over. Not even two weeks have passed. Really, they can't expect a death every seven days . . .
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ray was just here to practice his archery, but—]
Maybe you should consider not thinking out loud.
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The young man has caught this participant at an unseemly time. It was not my intention to give voice to those words.
[he pauses.]
Are you . . . here to practice?
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week 2, friday
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damn it.]
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Young man, come in. There's something I want to show you.
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What?
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These were given to me by a great god. Without instruction for their use, though, I haven't been able to do anything with them.
[they can't be mere paper. what would be the point?]
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week 3; saturday
So Advancement Opportunity was used on you, huh? If that's true, you left that part out of your explanation before.
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Would it have changed anything? Either way, I was going to defect.
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week 3; sunday
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[AND HERE IS RAY TO RUIN HIS PEACEFUL DAY.]
Have you ever spoken to Indulgence?
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Great Indulgence? No, I can't say that I have.
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Anyway, go see him sometime soon. You don't need an offering beyond saying that I sent you.
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week 4; saturday
Young man, if it weren't for you, we might not have found out the truth.
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... Thanks. Just doing what's expected of this competition, though.
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Is it? What do you think is expected of this contest, exactly?
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